Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, December 10, 2019
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hey elvis i know you think she started sing ing when she was born BUT YOU ARE WRONG so could you please fix that :)
ReplyDeleteHello Elvis. I see you have put some information inside of this biteable I like the style you have used with it. However there is something that stood out to me. So Lord was born in 1996 but she sung as a teen in 1996 I do not thing it makes that much sense. But everything else is nice maybe you could double check your spelling next time. But this is a really good post Keep it up.
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